Untitled #21

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I wrote this as part of the MiracleChallenge. It was fun and tasking.

Down on one knee with my arms stretched out

I don’t have to babble; she knows

Her left arm uncovers her still surprised face

She stretches it out and it fits perfectly on the finger

Finally, I see a smile; a knowing smile.

______________________________________________

She knows, and I know too.

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17 comments

  1. Miracle :) · August 22

    How sweet to read. You told this very beautifully in few lines. Perfect treat. It was YES in Smiles. Brilliant use of Prompt image. Congrats for completing challenge no.5 πŸ˜‡πŸŽ‰
    It’s a pleasure to have you in MiracleChallenge weekly writing community. Keep writing and have a great day ahead πŸ˜ƒ

  2. Nedoux · August 22

    Awwww, a proposal. Your words held my hands and I could picture the two of them in my head.

    It’s a wonderful rush of emotions, expectation from one side and surprise from the other, happiness both ways, if she says yes or simply gives a knowing smile. πŸ™‚

  3. Tony Michele · August 22

    Thank you πŸ˜‡. I’m glad to be a part.

    Have a great week ahead!

  4. Miracle :) · August 22

    That’s warm to hear. Thank you πŸ™‚

  5. Miracle :) · August 22

    Reblogged this on miraclegirlblog and commented:
    Hello Everyone !

    Check out the latest post for β€˜Weekly Writing #MiracleChallenge’ Week – 10 : https://miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com/2016/08/16/miraclechallenge-week-10-dated-16th-22nd-august-2016/

    Blogger : Tony Michele

    Poem Title : Untitled-21

    Challenge No : 5

    Challenge : Write a Tiny Tale /Poem using below prompt image in 5 or less sentences(for tale) and 5 or less lines(for poem)

    For those who are new to #MiracleChallenge, every Tuesday morning, I post new Writing prompts for 5 challenges to write Short Story / Tiny Tale/ Poem / Haiku/ Senryu / Limerick & many more.

    Visit my blog to know the latest writing prompts and the rules to participate in #MiracleChallenge for the week dated from 16th -22nd August, 2016.

    Yes ! 22nd August i.e. today is the last day for submission; before 120.00 AM IST.

    To read participant’s submissions for Miracle Challenges, Click Here.

    Kindly, everyone read and inspire each other to write.

    Happy Blogging !

    Enjoy and have fun:)

    From,

    Miracle:)

    (www.miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com )

  6. somawrites · August 22

    Beautiful! πŸ™‚

  7. Tony Michele · August 22

    Thank you! πŸ™πŸΎ

  8. Tony Michele · August 22

    Indeed, there are so many emotions.

    Of course; it’s a beautiful thing to want and be wanted/accepted.

    Thank you for reading and commenting Nedu. Have a wonderful week! ✌🏾️

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  10. somawrites · August 23

    You’re welcome!

  11. Yvonne · August 31

    The words created a perfect image in my mind.

    Really Nice.

    http://www.yvonnyblog.wordpress.com

  12. Tony Michele · August 31

    Thank you for reading and commenting πŸ™‚.

  13. Yemie · November 7

    Aww! This is got romance written all over it from start to finish…..its what priceless and timeless moments are made of, plus it totally grabs too. Makes for a pretty ‘schweet’ read! πŸ˜„

    The picture You paint with ’em compelling words TM, is really picturesque….picture perfect! Breathes life into a quote attribute to the compassionate Florence Nightingale, the founder of modern day nursing and she who was fondly referred to as ‘The Lady With The Lamp’! She affirms this and I quote her verbatim…’I think one’s feelings waste themselves in words, they ought ALL to be distilled into actions which brings results’! And just as a picture and a touch of hands are worth a gazillion words; so is that smile up there! A smile like that aint plastic and it don’t lie! Its a knowing smile and it sayd it all- YES! YES!!! FRIGGIN’ DARN YEAH! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    You scored a huge one with this offering TM; its a win…..ab-SO-lutely crushworthy! At. It. Boy! 😎😁

  14. Tony Michele · November 7

    Yemo! πŸ˜ƒ. It’s nice to see you back in the wordpress sphere. How’ve you been?

    Hehe 😁😎. Your comment just put a huge one on my face πŸ™‚ before I even checked what the post entailed πŸ˜„.

    I like the quote.

  15. Yemie · November 7

    Hehehe. I’ve been fine TM, ’bout as happy as a pig splashing and swimming in the mud! πŸ˜‚

    Thank You for that ‘Hero’s Welcome’; I plenty ‘ppreciate! πŸ˜‡πŸ˜„

    Am sure You’ve been keeping well Yourself and Your writes are on a whole ‘nother level….am so loving ’em! πŸ˜€

    As per being ‘back’ on WP, can’t really say for now! I just go with the flow….to wherever the tides take me!πŸ˜ƒ

    Thanks again TM, the ‘Yemo’ crooner! 😈Plus, I should find You a Moniker soon…been a long time coming! So then,Watch. This. Space. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  16. Tony Michele · November 7

    Hmmm. I hope it brings you back again and again πŸ™‚.

    πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. I’d do that.

  17. Yemie · November 7

    You bet TM, I’d definitely look in whenever I happen by these plains and you can copy, paste and ‘bank’ that! πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜‚

    Thanks TM, You honor me! 😁

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